In my opinion there are many types of masculine office "people" and I believe your design would satisfy the majority of them, but I think it would have been "better" if its coldness level was put down a notch because even males are humans not robots. But on the whole i like it =) go magnets!
I agree with warik.. that the design looks too stiff for the intended market..
however i like the whole concept of the modern technological looks with the stylish steel style as it can represent masculinity..
You hav also taken to consideration how busy the office male are and they tend to loose their stationary.. by using magnets they will find it harder to loose their pens.. so overall u hav shown a great design and present it well in your appearance model
This Magno-Pen and holder are quite unique and stylish products unlike any I have seen before. I like the idea of the pen connects to holder via magnet, probably it brings feel-good interaction with your product while using it.
However, your product did not aim at specific target. “For the office” is still too broad. It would be a great idea if you narrow down your target and make it more specifically.
i think its a really innovative way to design a pen via magnet,and the designing is stylish,unique,which brings the fresh air to the "boring" office,its suitable for the target market. however the notch where on the edge,give me a feeling of uncertainty,whether or not the pen could put in,although its magnet.
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In my opinion there are many types of masculine office "people" and I believe your design would satisfy the majority of them, but I think it would have been "better" if its coldness level was put down a notch because even males are humans not robots. But on the whole i like it =) go magnets!
I agree with warik.. that the design looks too stiff for the intended market..
however i like the whole concept of the modern technological looks with the stylish steel style as it can represent masculinity..
You hav also taken to consideration how busy the office male are and they tend to loose their stationary.. by using magnets they will find it harder to loose their pens.. so overall u hav shown a great design and present it well in your appearance model
This Magno-Pen and holder are quite unique and stylish products unlike any I have seen before. I like the idea of the pen connects to holder via magnet, probably it brings feel-good interaction with your product while using it.
However, your product did not aim at specific target. “For the office” is still too broad. It would be a great idea if you narrow down your target and make it more specifically.
i think its a really innovative way to design a pen via magnet,and the designing is stylish,unique,which brings the fresh air to the "boring" office,its suitable for the target market.
however the notch where on the edge,give me a feeling of uncertainty,whether or not the pen could put in,although its magnet.
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